Narrative: Jeffa's Writing

Learner: Jeffa
Area:Writing Level 2
Date: 04.06.18 
In Writing, we have been learning to plan our writing carefully and build sentences into paragraphs. We know that paragraphs have one main idea and the following sentences add more detail or ideas to the main idea and previous sentences. Our hapu have been writing about our experiences at Swimming.

Jeffa is beginning to build sentences into paragraphs. He has been learning to add more detail and ideas into his writing. Jeffa is beginning to order her ideas carefully into paragraphs.
He is developing her curiosity by asking questions and is slowly making connections by using ideas discussed in a larger group. Jeffa is beginning to think carefully about his ideas and the audience he is writing for.

Key Competencies: Managing Self Thinking Relating to others Participating and Contributing and through the use of digital tools - using language, symbols and texts 

Next Steps: 
Continue using detailed ideas in your writing
Reflect on your learning and think of how you can improve
Keep practising your writing at home